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Luscious Lust

Desire destroying depraved desire
Glance grabbing gripping glutenous glance
Fire flames fueling fantasy fire
Romance rusts revealing rushed romance

Behold benevolent beauty behold
Lust lures lonely lost lad's luscious lust
Uncontrolled undenied unfold uncontrolled
Trust torn tragic trial torn trust

Gold gone gorging grasping greedy gold
Deprived discontent deadly drive deprived
Hold held hellish heated hole hunger hold
Revived ravenous resolve revived

Compassion consumes carnal compassion
Passion pleasure pleases prideful passion

Author notes

A different take on the Shadow Sonnet invented by the lovely and talented Amera M. Andersen

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  • Amera gold member
    July 8

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    I love it! I added it to my list!


    Love,
    Amera♥