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Make-Believe

Missing image
Absent minded, yet beautiful.
The morning and evening star.
She wears pearls and fancy lace,
and drives the most expensive car.

She gets on stage
to give fame another shot.
Picture perfect and in control,
pretending to be something shes not.

When underneath the shining lights,
shes in an imaginary place;
and free from the memories
shes been longing to erase.

But when make believe is over
shes still broken and misled;
and later that night
paramedics pronounced

her


dead

Author notes

i used your words as a word bank and tried to use as many as possible. hope you like it.

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  • first i would like to say, OMG that pic is divine! i love it love it love it! it looks like a photoshop wet dream I love it. your words too are divine. wonderful work. like butta...lol. on a side note i noticed you are from PA where? I am from pittsburgh.

    • thanks for the comment. i just love how you express yourself as individual and not as part of a crowd like so many people do. Im about an hour west of Philly in Coatesville.

  • wow for not writing or claiming you havent had inspiration, this is great! I like it a lot you rhyme very well♥