In my room I sit
wrists pulsing to be cut open
In my room i sit
the entire time just hoping
wishing, praying, dreaming
that the urge would go away
wishing, praying, dreaming
i could go without cutting for today
but i know that wont happen
so I cut open a vein
I know that wont happen
after all love is pain
Author notes
this is my first poem I've posted on here. I know it sucks but..........
What did you think?
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I liiiiike alot i relatee
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i really like this one.
and i can really relate to it. -
the last stanza is great!
this is a very simple poem, but good in it's torment. -
wow... you guys actually like it? *jawdrop*
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This poem does not suck. You let out your emotions and sadness in this. It is very good therapy to write it out, it helps me!
Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you are having fun on this site!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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I love this poem.. So sad, but so deep and emtional. Great write. i can really relate.
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