I have two hearts..
The left and the right..
Hold them apart..
Its not too bright..
Hide them stealthly..
One, two, three..
Two different hearts..
Ain't good to see..
I have two ladies..
The left and the right..
Love them apart..
Is it wrong or right?
They love me surely..
One, two three..
Two different girls..
It could not be..
I have two loves..
The left and the right..
Keep them apart..
I have no right..
Help me, help me..
One, two, three..
Two different loves..
It's hard, you see?
I have two hours..
The left or the right?
Break one apart..
I guess that's right..
Tell her softly..
One, four, three..
But, I'm choosing her..
I'm really sorry..
A contest entry
- BEST KID POET OF 2009.. Five ROUNDS.. 5 THEMES!!! Kids from 4-15years ONLY!! by xXGoddessofPainXx.
400 points, ended July 14, 30 entries
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Wow usually I write really long comments but this piece left me speechless its amazing I love it! Im adding you as a fave!
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thanks.
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I have to say this is one impressive piece. It's aamazing rhyme and perfect flow. Love the things you chose to write about, women, hearts, and loves.. I think it's honestly a very happening piece. Good luck on ur one, two, threes.. Lo
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this was really interesting, I love the way you set it up. It was like a story. Good job.
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