Birthday wishes, for
The beautiful birthday girl
May your day be filled
With happiness, joy, laughter
Peace, love, pixie dust, smiles.
Author notes
Tanka poems are short, lyrical poetry structured in 31 syllables arranged in groups of 5, 7, 5, 7 and 7, syllables, in a two-part form with the first part in 5, 7, 5, and the second part in 7 and 7.
Happy 18th birthday, I hope you have a good one, with no deaths, no sickness, only happiness and laughter, and lotsa balloons! .♥.
In a list
A contest entry
- happy birthday to me! by nobodys-girl.
2081 points, ended July 21, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me how you like to be turned on!
Comments
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Nice
I have never heard of a tanka poem,but having read the authors notes,it is an appealing style.I do not feel I could pen any thing of any strength using this tecnique,but you did so,so wonderfully. -
Pixie dust
Pixie dust is so pretty,this short write has the feel of something that could be the message inside a greetings card.I enjoyed the brief,beautiful tone this write has.Very delicate,very dainty. -
aww so cute! i loved the last line the best, it totally captured my personality! thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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You are very welcome, and I do hope you have the best birthday imaginable, you only turn 18 once, live it up
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