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The Moons call to the surfer

Hypnotic beams which draw the tide,
A Lustrous face where souls collide,
His cresents formed by angels crys.

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  • SteveS gold member
    July 10
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    Super nice write! Congrats on the gold.


  • voices
    July 7

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    righteous lines dude, tasty its true.

    i read it out loud and thought it sounded good with angels being angel. idk ,you might want totry it.

    peace.


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 7

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    Absolutely beautiful! Lovely write, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • Mark Harrap
    July 7

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    excellent

    i have never surfed but i fish.....the ocean by moonlight is majestic....i'm a sucker for an ocean sunset,how many times can i take the same photo....a few more i think

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