Pursuing out hearts in emotional draws
Ever vigilant of our affections, addictions and flaws
Testifying on our behalf, a soul worthy of love and soft paws
A contest entry
- p e t by Cerulean Sunrise.
1400 points, ended July 27, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thats a really sweet and cute poem. I love the face that you leave no hints as to the subject except at the end when you mention soft paws. And I love the acrostic pet in the poem and the title. Clever. Good luck in the contest!
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Great!
Because of your title & lack of categories I didn't notice at first this was an acrostic. 
I think this is the first one I've ever seen you write & I love it! 
Rhyming even...I don't do much of that in mine. Delightful...all the best in the Contest. 
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I like the mono rhyme.
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Yes. This one.
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You mean i win?!
but the contest isn't even closed yet 
Wow, I'm better then i thought (._.)
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Nice.
Short & to the point. Good message delivered here, young poet.
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Awwwww, I love how you ended this piece with "soft paws"! That's so adorable.
Fantastic job with this write!
♥Kate
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