Night after night I come to you,
I hold my breath in anticipation,
I see you come in the room,
And the butterflies in my belly begin their dance.
A smile starts to play across my lips,
I wait for you to say hello,
You say one simple word,
Baby, and i melt.
I am yours,
For now or forever,
I`m here till the end,
And my love keeps growing.
Your name on my lips,
Sweeter than strawberry wine in summer,
Your smile playing on your face,
Working its way into my memory.
I dont want to ever forget,
The way i feel,
When you open your mouth,
And tell me you love me.
Please tell me what you think
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You write so beautifully my sweet one. I wish you happiness always and hope, even if it isn't like you dreamed of at 16, you will one day feel happiness and contentment in your life. You know I've got your back always.
Mama
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I LOVE IT !!
the way you play the body into the emotion was perfect, i love this poem. thank you so much for sharing.
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Awesome poem... The emotion jumps out of the words and overtakes you as you read
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Love it
Sweeter than strawberry wine in summer
this was my favourite line by far.
I love the emotion in this piece it comes over really strong, I love the passion and the desire in the undertone and the lasting love on the surface.
bravo well done -
Thanks to all of you for your nice comments!
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It's a very good poem. I enjoy the metaphors and imagery. Even more though, it's the way I feel about the one I love!
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So Lovely
This was so loving and sweet. How wonderful is that certain feeling you describe. A delight to read. Take care, Sandy
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ti is tender and sweet in only the way a first true love can be...I hope all goes just as you wish and deserve! good for you for putting it out there! peace and light always in ALL ways, Kendal
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Your smile playing on your face,
Working its way into my memory.
Sweet and seductive, without being dirty. This is a great love poem--even greater because it is not about a broken heart. Thanks for sharing it.
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