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saturn's 62nd moon

if love
died with the light of the moon
and there were no stars to befriend it
I'd take that damn rock
and hurl it unto the ring of saturn
with my brother's old slingshot

and to continue loving you
I'd create the stars
to light our way out of the darkness
on a moonless night

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prompt:

start your poem with "if love" and end with "on a moonless night"
25 lines or less

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    July 28
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    This is so well stated. I am glad to have you as a favourite!


  • CaliOkie silver member
    July 20
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    Again, your heart is in your work. Beautiful. So very well done.

    Garrison