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Crazy

I feel like the whole world is spinning but I'm standing still.
How can I act fine,
When the way my mind's twisting
I'm ill.
The air is breath seeing cold.
So sick and tired of doing what
I'm told.
Please.Beat me with the brick of self-control.
Let me know that I'm alive.
Because what I'm feeling isn't.
Save me from myself before I lose what's real.
What I feel!
Let me know me know before I go so far away.
Let me hear you say I'm not crazy.

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  • so damn broken
    August 30

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    ha!this like, explains exactly how i feel at times
    i love the last two lines the most!
    makes me feel like im not the only person that feels like that,

  • Zarlah
    July 9

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    wow

    I love it, I can't believe what you were able to potray in just a few lines...thank you, it was wonderful!

  • your not crazy