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Mentality

You have got to be kidding me.
The mind is something,
powerful,
beautiful,
uncontrollable.
How dare
Humanity try to control,
withhold,
this creation of power.
Secrets hidden,
thoughts,
feelings.
A mind should not be tampered with.
The past,
the present,
locked away,
forever.
Only one,
controls one.
No one should think
otherwise.

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I know it is short, but I felt like I should just put it up. Recently I was told to think something that I didn't belive. Commanded something I had no deisre to do. I guess it's a retaliation.

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  • Muse6500
    July 10
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    I agree. Also very powerful, I love the single word lines, it adds more oomph