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Eternal Awe

Standing alone I gaze around,
Amazed at waves as my heart is bound.
Staring away into the night,
Not caring about the lives that were right.

Looking in awe at the sky so high,
I wonder why did I let out a sigh.
A few hours later it will be day,
But why can't sorrow remain at bay?

I look into the firmament that is well shod,
While the stars beckon me where no humans can ever trod.
My heart finally is forver repaired,
As I realize that eternity is thus prepared.

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A poem that I wrote when I was in the middle of a journalism conference in college. The photo-journalism session was going on and the words to this just flowed. Glad I had a a notepad in hand...

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  • grampabob1946 silver member
    August 26

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    Wonderful!!

    The night skys can be quite beautiful. God has provided an amazing world for us to enjoy. It's to bad so many people are too busy to notice it. It is a testiment to your faith that you have!