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poem of a "dead" stair

a dead stair?
stairs don't die
I'm made of wood
If I died, I died with the tree that fell
In the wilderness somewhere
years before this house was built

a dead stair?
in a dead house
that housed a person now dead
even ghosts don't like me
because they no longer have feet

...

they can fly.

stare at this dead stair
stare at it there...
you'll go cross-eyed
waiting for me to move
if I was never alive
how am I dead?
stairs don't know sadness
but I'm supposed to be sad?
I'M A STAIR, DAMN IT!
I'M A STAIR!

Author notes

LOL, trying to break writer's block...
Prompt: "sad poem of a dead stair"

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  • This made me smile. This is a great little poem and has fantastic imagery and a lovely pace to it.

  • Ooh very nice visuals written here.
    A truly original piece of poetry,
    and a different spin on the prompt;
    I really like it. I felt a touch of humour
    here as well, and after reading so many
    sad & depressing writes, it was good
    to read the irony in this

    Excellent job!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering