Dearest Stranger
I writing you in hopes to speak to a part you that has died in me.Maybe you will a reason to believe in love again.I know I don't know you but when i looked into your brown eyes,I felt like I knew you before.My heart's been broken and I don't think I could love someone again.She's my heart and we promised to be together forever.The way she touched me,held me,loved me brought endless joy to my life.When we were together,time stood still.She was my world and I was hers,then she was gone like a kiss in the wind.My heart gone forever.
I haven't stop crying.I still hear her calling my name.The pain of not feeling her touch has become more than I can bear.Without her love I feel so cold and alone.How do I live without her?How do I live without my heart?Please tell me because I don't know how
Sorrowfully
Moses
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M o s e s t h e l a s t s a m u r a i
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dear moses.
this letter has brought me to tears. you see, i know what its like for a girl to take every part of you that you have ever had. to be building up your heart all of your life, building up your strength, love, hope, everything, and then she just takes it and one day its there and the next day its not. i know how it feels to love someone, for their hands to be your hearts home, and then one day your heart doesnt have a home anymore and its somewhere in a garbage can and you cant find it and you are cold and empty. i cant tell you how much i relate. but i cant tell you--
time doesnt make things better. time gives you the strength to deal with things better. your heart is always inside of you, even if you cant feel it at the moment, its there. sometimes it takes someone else to show you its there, a friend, a family member, a stranger, a new lover. sometimes you just cant see it on your own. i wish i could be that stranger that shows you your heart has a home, inside of you. this girl might have stole everything you had but now its just time to rebuild what you lost. and its okay to cry and to hurt and to miss her. but dont live your life wishing she was back, find a reason to smile and laugh and live, please. ♥
i've been there. i went years wishing i had the one i loved back and i missed out on so much. i let life slip through my fingers instead of grasping onto what i had left. until i realized that today is all i have. im not guarenteed a tomorrow or even a next minute. what happens if today is all you have left and tomorrow doesnt come? do you want to die knowing you were miserable and heartbroken and letting everything slip away from you?
this letter really hit home. it broke my heart. i wouldnt want anyone, even the person i dislike the absolute most, to feel this kind of pain. but unfortuneatly its not stoppable. so i can only be there for people when they do hurt like this. im here, if you ever need to talk.
i hope with everything i have inside of me that you find a way to smile again and show the world your beauty because im sure it can make the world shine. you have more inside of you than a broken heart and an empty soul. reach a littler deeper. ♥
with love always and forever,
crystal.
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