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I feel....

I wish I could tell you
Everything that I feel
But I just can't do it
The pain is un-real
In my heart, I am hurting
I feel alone and so sad
I didn't think I could ever,
feel like this and so bad
You left me standing
With no one there
This burden is too much for me to bear
I never thought I could fall for the same thing again//
But i guess things like this.. Just never end

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  • PianoMan
    July 7
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    Wow. This is another beautiful poem. Sadly this happens way too often to people, but no matter what happens, we can always make it through. I've been there and it's not fun, but it does get a little better as time goes on. I agree with amandamoo217: The picture fits the poem perfectly. Great job!!

  • NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    That was awesome!!! BTW LOVE THE PIC!!!!!