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Holy Manicure.

God's massive fingernail,
snipped by the angels that groom him,
hangs snagged on a black velvet cloud.

A contest entry

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  • Emmyb gold member
    July 8
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    this is really impressive.


  • Renegade Theory
    July 7
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    I like that image. I've never thought of the moon that way. -R.T


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 6

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    *Chuckles* This is quite witty. Not exactly an original thought, but I can dig it. Nice job, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!

    Safely hidden in darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All