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Oh My God

Oh my god did you see that...
Look at that skirt...
And those pants...
There she is...
Is it true...
I think so...
Did you see her...
He did...
I think that one is up the duff...
Serious...
Would I lie to you...
There's the bell...
Ok got to go see ya...
Totally lets do lunch...


Oh my god did you see that...

Author notes

I used option 4...I wrote a poem similar to this like 3 years ago and liked it but ya lost it so tried to recreate it....it is a true remider of just how bitch high school can be lol...

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  • XxPrinc3ssMaraxX
    September 29

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    I think this one is very realistic. It definately could be like that in real life. I choose this one as my prompt to enter your contest.

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