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Lecturing and Suicide

Why are you lecturing me
Why make me face more pain
I have enough to think about
You're polluting my brain
You are drivimg me insane
I don't know how much more I can take

Why are we going over this again
I know what I did wrong
I don't need you telling me that
I was there
The lesson is life is not fair
But deal with it cuz I'm stuck here
...not if i can help it

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