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With eyes that burn into the depths of my soul
a smile that melts my once dead heart
tears that burn me, like a dying star
a presence that had me hooked from the start

you haunt my dreams, with a touch so soft
revive the ambition of love true slave
hold me, love me, kiss me now
take my heart and soul, to your grave

a shimmering beauty, spectrum of love
is my gift, from me to you
when i close my eyes i see all i need
in the body and soul thats you

all the colours of the rainbow shine on me
as you whisper my name as you sleep
this fate was written long ago
the fate, that we'd fall so deep

this is a body of water no man could swim
miles of ground no man could cover
a mountain that we can only climb together
a portrait of bliss, only we can uncover

I will wish upon that shooting star
as we lay in the grass this night
you're my everything, and i will stay forever
i will NEVER lose this fight

i will fight for our love, till the day that we die
and i will prove this love is true
Your like the sun, you're warm, you'll always be there
and i couldn't live without you





Author notes

wrote this the other week when i was drunk haha, thought it was pretty damn good for a drunk person =]]

it needs a title though any ideas?

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