You say you need to talk,
I'm thinking about putting our love on park.
Your far away, Its strange I can feel your sorrow,
Some reason I'm not looking forward to a tomorrow.
Why dose love hurt so much?
Wondering if you even feel my touch.
Im scared to know how you feel,
Scared to find out our love isnt real.
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Aww.
I felt like this a couple of weeks ago.
It'll pass. I like this.
Good luck in the contest.
♥
Dax
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good entry
Isn't needs the apostrophe,other wise I can find no faults with this piece.
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