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Newark Nook


There’s a nook in Newark
a few scant blocks from me
Branch Brook Park
in all its’ majesty!

Designed by the architect
of ‘The Central Park’
it’s a lovely place to be
but never after dark!

Large winding lake
ensconced by lions
ever so statuesque
fountain soaring high, as if in a quake!

Ducks galore and even geese
come right here to have a feast
best be lively on your feet
or you’ll be wearing what they eat!

There’s a nook in Newark
a few scant blocks from me
Branch Brook Park
in all its’ majesty!




Author notes

I love this park & wish I had the physical means to enjoy it like I'd like!

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  • guardianhost gold member
    July 10

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    Beautiful settings

    Makes me wish I were young enough to skamper through it .
    Wish I could see photo's of the park - sounds like a great place .

    • There are photos!

      Just Google Branch Brook Park, Newark, NJ & you'll find sites with pix! I wish I could scamper through as well!

  • ooh nice! Cool idea with different rhyme schemes for each stanza.
    good luck!
    Celtic

    • LOL....

      I write 'em as they come & don't normally stick to a 'standard' unless I'm writing specifically in a form. Thanks for your read & wishes!

  • I love city parks

    Although I don't live in the northeast anymore, I'm going to google Branch Brook Park to find out more about it.

    Do you have any photos?

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