Past
of leaves falling;
reminders of decay.
Colder winds
make changes
-Winter-
Changes make
winds colder.
Decay of reminders;
falling leaves of
past.
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Present
of grass fading
underneath snow;
flowers sprouting from
dances of chance with rain.
-Spring-
Rain with chance of dances
from sprouting flowers;
snow underneath
fading grass of
present.
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Future
of forest in flames,
of foreshadows from
liquidized evolution;
backwards understanding.
-Summer-
Understanding backwards
evolution liquidized
from foreshadows of
flames in forest of
future.
Author notes
For Unplanned: Round 6 (Top 7)
Comments
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Breathtaking!
OMG!! You are a pure GENIUS! I love palindromes and even made a weak attempt at one, but you put me to shame.. this work is just out of this world! Especially with the articulate use of alliteration and imagery! Just Impressive..WoW.. I envy your talent.. Congrats
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This is really good, it wasn't till I was halfway through I realized that the stanzas were being switched around in the middle with the same words. Even though I suppose the title would have given that away
lol. The imagery is good, very well penned.
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