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The Art Of Denial

[[STILL A WORK IN PROGRESS]]

I’m standing in front you,
heart spilled before your eyes,
which happens to be blacker than the coffee you constantly consume.
That’s right, I remember that you only drink black even though all this time has passed.

Those midnight eyes glaze over with that distant look.
You’ve heard this before, but from all the shattered hearts that were my predecessors.
They all took their cues beautifully, and knew when to fade away.
Yet, I was always obviously to such directions.
I wasn’t one to fade, I was the sort that preferred shining.

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  • Yeah!! You do listen to me!! Like I said I love this one, thanks for posting it.


    Now lets see those other starts!