i am happy when your her with me as a family.
i'm sad when you leave me again & your not here when i come home.
than i'm mad because your gone with no goodbye.
it's nice though when you call or sendme a card once in a while.
then i get scared because i dont know if i'll hear from you again.
i'm confused because you say you love me but you leave me over and over again.
What did you think
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This is really sad, it shows how you love someone and yet you are scared when they are gone.
I think that you should use a spell check, there are some words spelled wrong in here
And the letter 'i' should always be a capital.
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Sad thoughts..
Nicely penned though.
You could make it better by fixing some grammatical issues.
"when your her" - when you're here
"& your not here" - & you're not here
Be Well
Mark
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