Drifting love notes
strike melancholy moods,
adorned in a fluttering hearts
anticipation
vibrations echoe sultry tunes,
in the key of passions delight,
as restless eyes whisper melodies
of a gentle sunset in yearning
saturating her sensuality
in jasmine flavors of affection,
wanting him inside the dark
allies of her lust
sweet tingles of frustration
sparks symphonies of desire,
marinated in the depths of
her wanton cravings
as a blue moonlight serenades
her impetuous thirst, inside
the wandering enchantments
of her most exotic fantasies
Author notes
See Image by Mick Payton- called Impatience on link below
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2452321
A contest entry
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sweet tingles of frustration
sparks symphonies of desire,
marinated in the depths of
her wanton cravings
good lord Darell, you know me so well
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I thank you for this hot write, it's steamy and delicious.
Love,
jin -
A very sensualy compelling piece of poetry
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brilliant
and vivid imagery
enjoyed this and very well written
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Wonderful
Wonderful imagery!
I really enjoyed this write
Cherry xxx
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Wow
The imagery used in this poem is phenomenial. Its utterly beautiful in its own cynical dark way.
Beautifully written! -
Very nice! A sensual poem with good imagery...excellent work!
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