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Thoughts on Life

Why is it,
that whenever you start to trust someone,
they let you down?

When did this world start lying,
bent on power and destruction
all for self-value?

Why you we try to perfect ourselves,
just to bring others down,
only for us to die in the end?

Since when did we question everything
and search for answers we don't want to know,
just to say we do?

Since time's beginning...
That's when.

Author notes

Just some things I thought about, and think about fequently. The 3rd stanza is my favorite. Because it really seems that we just try and try to be perfect by taking others down and gettin plastic surgery...yet in the end. What's it for? "We eat, sleep, and fight to survive, only to die in the end." <-A little something I made up one day thinking about this stuff.

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  • Nyx Moon
    July 6
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    I likeie!!^^ Sorry i didn't call you I was at my great grandparent's house.

    • Aw, it's ok. I wouldn't have been able to talk much anyway with the fourth and such.