There in the fields of gold I laid my head.
In wishes washed as
dreams fell from dreams.
My eyes behold the beauty,
my hands touch the truth.
Your head crowned in glory,
your mouth speaks my hearts desire.
A glow becomes brighter,
a smile more profound.
In the light of you my wings
to take me off the ground.
My own halo excapes me,
no longer able to hold back the light within me.
Author notes
Posted from my cell phone. Edits 2 come.
Please tell me what you think
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nice..
this is sweetly romantic my friend, and not too shabby for having done it on a cellphone!
p.s. you mistyped 'feilds' it should be 'fields'
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aww this is so beautiful.
In the light of u my wings <-- i think there is a mistake in this line?
There in the feilds of
gold I laid my head.
In wishes washed as
dreams fell from dreams <-- i loved this first bit
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lol
That would be texting habits coming out. I posted from my cell phone. I don't get much time on the computer these days. Thank u so much for the sweet comment. If that is my only mistake we are on a roll! LOL
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