In the meadow between here and there
She cannot seem to let go of ither place
The beauty of her surroundings in each
Grasping her inner soul with divine force
Leaving her breathless in the shadows
Cascading the after tears of such turmoil
The dawn rises in one realm
As it hastily lowers in the other
The reflections mirroring life and death
As the artist paints the final strokes in her
... ever seeing eyes.
© July 6, 2009
Author notes
Twin Prompts
All the art of living lies in a fine mingling of letting go and holding on.
- Henry Ellis
http://princess-of-shadows.deviantart.com/art/death-of-a-princess-128370100
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A contest entry
- Double Prompt q u i c k i e by Kathraina.
650 points, ended July 6, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is the kind of poetry I understand I can never write but always I remain a true admirer of such classic piece.
Reading a poem as this has been a pleasure for me always.
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well, thank you, your words are music to my ears.
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Excellent write that you have penned here, as usual you know exactly how to convey all the beauty in what you do
congratulations on the well deserved gold my friend 
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thanks, hun, much appreciated.
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well...
would you just look at at you.., i go away for a bit and you just keep writing and and winning gold in stuff!
good write, and congrats on the gold my sweet friend..
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hehe, you are so sweet, thanks, hun, glad you enjoyed it.
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Oh wow, this piece is absolutely stunning.
Marvelous job with the prompt!
Bravo
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Omg, Kate, I was just entering to enter, bcz, yeah, hehe. Oh thank you, hun, you are so sweet.
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thank you for the amazing entry in my contest!
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