You have no idea whatt you did to me
All you see is the happy face i put on so nobody can see the pain that I hide everday
I am the girl that you will never want to hold and love again
You just threw what we had together away like a frisbee
Not caring about what that would do
No matter how much I try to forget i still can't forget you
Even as the days go on my love for you stays
When I see your face the pain is almost unbearable
Somehow I get through it but yet nothing ever feels the same
I just don't know how much more of this I can take
When I gave you my heart you took it but later on you threw it to the ground breaking it into pieces then lit them on fire, burning them to ashes
You expect me to be all right after but ..
The damage is done and nothing can be repaired
You just left me there broken and beyond repair
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Just please tell me what you think be honest.
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Comments
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a good piece of poetry penned, ah love, it is not all a bed of roses and smiles and giddy sensations, it is also pain, and heartach, and travelling through sorrow's domain, but that's life.
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this has some good potential.
if you were to break it into stanzas, throw some imagery and metaphors make it pleasant to the eyes of the reader and it can flourish.
also i believe in your title
broken and beyend repair ---> broken and beyond repair. -
another powerful poem,
congrats
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