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Honour and Colour

Its their love we wish
days merge and dismiss
her Holiness drifts
even by her godly gifts
rivers of suspense
irrigated with pretense

taught herself archery
yet her aim unclearly
strikes a blow to a king
her king in mind

The fortress unchained
songs shower disdain
riches crash on seats
where all congress meets

The queen she stands
as four winged creatures land
on the stones before the gates

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  • ajocean silver member
    July 7
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    very interesting