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Providence





Each year the glow of autumnal melancholy
birds flying back on an ocean desert,
rushing jubilant
to reach a land they know by their deep memory,
great hanging gardens where flowers are blooming,
bright-colored rows of mangoes , tasty delicious,
trees intertwined with branches temples,
fresh tracks ...
all to show their vague dreams.





















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~s p i r i t u a l a n g e l~
Prompt: Word: Providence

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  • glitterydoom
    July 6

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    Each year the glow of autumnal melancholy
    birds flying back on an ocean desert,
    rushing jubilant <- love thoose opening lines

    and the ending is stunning

    good luck in the contest