New Moon
What have you got in your knapsack fair,
White moon, bright moon, pearling the air,
Spinning your bobbins and fabrics free,
Fleet moon, sweet moon, in to the sea?
A contest entry
- Guiding Light #3 by Dreamer With Dreams.
850 points, ended July 8, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Brief Magic!
SuperLove12,
This piece is quick and very clever in its use of imagery of the knapsack and, to me, the magic of the lesser light spinning the fabric of the night. This is really good! Come back and get busy, Spinner!
Jack
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very nice! short but good
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Good job, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
that is pretty!! great job!
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