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Here comes the train

Sitting on train tracks
With it all rushing through my mind
I know no one cares
My soul I will find

I can hear the deafening whistle
Traveling closely from far away
I need to do this for myself
I will not live another day

Maybe there's something for me up there
You will never know
Will you miss me one day?
When you think of me playing in the snow

Will you cry for me?
Will I be missed that much?
You seriously won't cry for me
I'll stop talking nonsense and stuff

Here comes the train
Off I go
One two three
Ready set go

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  • -speechless-

    holy crap! please don't kill yourself. I liked this write, i... i... I don't even know what to say! it was very wel written, and very sad.