scream
do it
scream as loud
as you fucking can
scream
to bring down the roof
holding your dreams in
break it down
so many
crude examples of
running
entities until
all are
massacred
so scream
scream loud
scream away the pain
and heartache
of another
brand new day
scream for me
with me
at me
just scream
as loud as you fucking can
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I like it. I don't know what to say about out it, or even a specific reason as to why I like it, but I do.
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good ^_^
thanks hon.
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oooooo I like this. dark and profantilizing (yes i made up a new word)
breathtaking
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heh, thankies.
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hmmmm this is a fasinating dark poem. You must really hate this person but I kinda get the feeling you are talking to yourself. At least this is the vibe that I picked up from this. I normally don't like repeativness in poetry , but your poem would be lacking with out it. Great style, and a great poem good job
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yea, i do that sometimes, i'll bitch about myself lol
thanks for the lovely comment.
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