Someone so beautiful,
Never meant to be burnt,
Someone so loveable,
Were others weren't,
So creative,
And caring,
So bold and dareing,
Amazing doesn't cover how perfect you were,
You are,
I know your happy were you are,
Everyone loves to go home,
And angels come from heaven right?
Promise me I'll meet you there,
One day we will have more to share,
You were the most amazing person in the world,
You were the stars on stormy nights,
And the rainbow after the thunderstorm,
You were the good luck charm on a braclet,
And the shelter that got us through,
You were raindrops on river water,
And the sparkling morning dew,
Never was there someone as special as you,
Nobody will forget you,
Nobody will replace you,
I hope you like it up there with all the other angels,
I hope god welcomed you home,
Know that you will always be loved,
Were nothing without you,
I know that we can go on,
But only because you left part of you behind just for us,
And a peice of you will forever be in our hearts.
R.I.P my dearest most beautiful hunter Odonnell.
Author notes
Lost her best friend he took his life. Sunday, 28th June 2009
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"You were the most amazing person in the world,
You were the stars on stormy nights,
And the rainbow after the thunderstorm,
You were the good luck charm on a braclet,
And the shelter that got us through,
You were raindrops on river water,
And the sparkling morning dew,
Never was there someone as special as you"
This is a very moving piece. You captured my attention and kept it until the end.
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wow that's really great I'm sorry for your loss
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Great write hun, raw emotions seep off every line.
Bravo
♥ Kate
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perfect
Thank you Erin. It's exactly true. it would embarrass him terribly, and he'd love it
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