So many memories,
some good, some bad.
Dreaming or fearing
the life we could have had.
You would call my phone
just to hear my voice;
and when it came to me or friends,
I was always your number one choice
The drugs and drinking
always interfered.
You became someone else
and your true colors appeared.
Your words seem sincere
your intentions were from the heart.
Your lies and empty promises,
drew us apart.
I loved you more
than i ever thought i could.
I hated you more
than you understood.
Hate won the battle
and I've moved on since then;
and to tell you the truth.
I'm happier now than I've ever been...
Author notes
this is about my ex-boyfriend. ive definently moved on with my life and honestly i could not be happier.
A contest entry
- Loving to Hate You, Hating to Love You, Loving to Love You by tinydarkgoddess.
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did my muse come back?
Comments
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awww . ilike this . Thass REAL emotion ! & ikan ssoooo relate .
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Raw and pure feelings; easily and simply presented. I am gald you moved on with your life and that you have found happiness that being with your ex could not give you. It has a nice flow and an easy read to it. Thank you for entering the contest. Best wishes!
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very emotional
I lvoe the rawness of feelings her, i know i could relate so well done
i wouldn't change a thing well presented,. simple clean and heart felt
bravo -
I like it! It has a really nice flow!
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