Her eyes never shimmered
As brightly
As Luna's
Author notes
just popped into my head 
A contest entry
- Guiding Light #3 by Dreamer With Dreams.
850 points, ended July 8, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short, and totally beautiful.
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Sometimes brevity speaks volumes. Well done and congrats on the medal.
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It's short! But the words that are there are lovely! I'm not sure there is a whole lot more to say haha. keep writing those pretty words!
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It doesnt feel nor sound finished bluey!
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i love this short but effective piece. excellent work. good luck.
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Perfection in simplicity. Absolutely brilliant honey.
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very short and sweet
Gorgeous
♥
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my eyes popped out of my heaad with this sweet short write very nice work
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Ooooo, I'm liking this. Very short, but has an impact! Nicely penned, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All
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