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The Early Bird




Joy rings out in rhyming tones
for this is a most important day!
We celebrate a special poet
who today enjoys her birthday!



No topic can elude her,
no words she cannot deploy,
for she is  talented and friendly,
the early-bird, waydownuponjoy!











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  • T-Dizzle Mcnizzle
    July 12
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    I love the joyful spirit of your writing here! Birthday poems are so fun!


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      July 12
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      It had to rush to get it to the page---
      had just found out it was her bday,
      and knew she would be off the board soon,
      so it was quite impromptu. But always
      nice to let someone know there
      is care in the air!!



  • waydownuponjoy
    July 7
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    Thank You M-C ...

    A poem and drawing for my special day only makes it more special and more memorable! Sorry I zipped off but this is a great follow up for me! Thank you so much for your caring ways! joy


  • arafura gold member
    July 6
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    Lovely!


  • Denerica
    July 6
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    Beautiful dedication to someone on their birthday, surprised it wasn't longer! Blessings

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      July 6
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      Hi, Denise.
      In an ealry morning chat I learned it was her bday,
      so I rushed to get it on the board before she left
      for vacation fun, but alas, she was gone before
      I got it all together!!!

      M-C


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 6

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    excellent

    A beautiful birthday poem sweetie
    Enjoyed this read a lot
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • DeeCrepit gold member
    July 6

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    A gracious wish for happiness
    upon a special birthday
    for waydownuponjoy!

    We, very best employ
    wishes, hopes on your day
    the greatest times and success!

    Terry


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    July 6
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    Thr look of the sky when you get up
    waaaaaaaaaaaay too early, joy!!!


  • pixiestix gold member
    July 6
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    One more cancerian to add to the pack.

    Sweet lyrical sounds of the early birds, heralding the new day, like waydownuponjoy's poetry and gentle spirit sings.

    Perfect birthday greeting Aes, in every single way.

    • waydownuponjoy
      July 7
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      Thanks Miss Pixie ...

      I do appreciate your thoughts and ain't being a cancer just grand? There's something about that moon too that makes us want to see it set and it's full right now! joy

      • pixiestix gold member
        July 7
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        Interesting how this thought just hit me...The new moon of this phase started on my b-day and was full for yours. We held the full cycle between us.

        Being a Cancer has its ups and downs but I can't imagine being any other way.

    • waydownuponjoy
      July 7

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      I like the way the sky gets ...

      brighter as each moment fills me with new awareness and I like that you noticed that I am an early riser as that is the best time of any day for me! joy

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      July 6
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      Ah, that sounds like joy, does it not!

      I was playing with the night sky graphic
      and hadn't seen you stop in!

      Thanks, pix!


      • pixiestix gold member
        July 6

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        We'll have to find you an "artist at work" sign.

        I like the contrast on the night sky one.

        • waydownuponjoy
          July 7
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          Your right about the ...

          "artist at work sign" and we could use a "poet at work" sign as well for one can't keep up with all this goings on to get any work done but it's all wonderful for me! Not enough time to do all that is exciting and fun! joy

        • Aesthete2000 gold member
          July 6

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          Hah! Artist on the phone---catching up--
          the girls at work calling to check up on me!!

          I kept making the night view smaller with slim border
          so it didn't stand out so much on the page.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    July 6

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    Ah, verses to celebrate birthday, in fine rhymes and warm lines.
    I wish Joy a wonderful and blessed birthday


    • waydownuponjoy
      July 7
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      Thanks for the b'day wishes MariGoes!


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      July 6
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      She's enjoying her day in her wonderful, colorful state of Florida!

      Thanks for stopping in, Mari!

      M-C

      • waydownuponjoy
        July 7
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        The Smokey Mountains ...

        are waaaaayyyyyyy north of Florida - in N. Carolina where the cool mountain air makes you truly enjoy Summertime!

        • Aesthete2000 gold member
          July 7
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          In my rush to get this together
          I forgot what you mentioned
          and then later I looked back at
          the message---oooops!!!


  • Yemassee gold member
    July 6

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    See now, she doesn't tell. I just think she wasnted to exclude me.

    I guess she ran, knowing you'd tell some of us...and who wants a Yemish Happy Birthday song?

    On my way to her page to annoy her.

    • waydownuponjoy
      July 7
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      I actually thought you were ...

      going to send that crate of Moxie! and I would love to hear that Yemish b'day song! and ... who knows when your b'day is? joy

      • Yemassee gold member
        July 7
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        craTE OF mOXIE? wOW, THAT WOULD BE PRICEY! LOL oops, caps lock on.

        My bday is in a few days but I'm not celebrating it.


        • Aesthete2000 gold member
          July 7
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          Hah! But you can't stop the rest of the world
          from taking even small note of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      July 6
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      It's the scary new avatar!
      Who kidnapped that handsome poet, Yemassee?

      • waydownuponjoy
        July 7
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        This reply thingy is messin' up badly ....

        it keeps repeating what I don't want to repeat and won't let me make new comments ... my apologies to alll that I messed up but I really do thank you all for all this attention that I don't deserve! joy


        • Aesthete2000 gold member
          July 7
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          If you leave and come back,
          re-laoading the page,
          that usually helps...

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