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The docks of London





A wide-open mouth guides the grasses west
pushing half puddles under the grey bell and

 

chimes it dully.

Shrubs bow to the broken
underground,

                   bound for better.

 

London bent left, in all hell churnings.

 

 

Morning in white cloth, the sky spills its veil.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Coathanger
    July 18
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    Inspiration for my next poem. I hope to that inspiration as much justice as you have here.

  • London you miserable wench, the great fire could not have been a smaller blessing for in the squalls of that city were the refuse of empire.

    The things you would never see lest you were lost in some Jack the Ripper fantasy, les you be boiling on the gun deck of an old man of war.

    London the great city it is yet sometimes she is a splendid whore.

    I really do like that city though.

  • I have never been to London, but someday I hope to have the opportunity to visit


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 7
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    Awesome...I will visit someday

  • Rowan gold member
    July 6
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    I've never been to London, till now. winks
    Thanks.


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 6

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    this is beautiful and such great brevity and vivid visuals here. what a wonderfully tight piece of writing that placed London right back in my eyes again!

    ~ Nicolette

  • Macsword
    July 6

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    I visited London back in 1972 and had five straight days of wonderful sunshine. I think things were less complicated back in 72.

    Very nice write Emma.

  • Beautiful Emma, a real pleasure to read.

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