It’s three AM, Friday night,
And my eyelids just won't fall.
Why am I cursed, why won’t it stop?
Your face, your body, on every wall.
No matter where I look,
no matter where I turn,
I see your eyes,
And my insides burn.
*chorus*
*I can’t get you outta my head,
I can’t get you outta my mind,
No matter where I go,
No matter how I try,
I can’t leave you behind.
Your image always haunts me,
These feelings, they won’t leave me.
No matter where I go,
No matter how I try,
I can’t leave you behind.*
It’s two days later,
Late afternoon,
I’m sittin on the roof,
Just watin for the moon.
As I gaze at the stars,
They penetrate my soul,
Discovering what I feel,
And what I feel is outta control.
*Chorus*
I don’t know how much longer,
I can take it,
How much longer,
I can fake it.
It’s getting to me,
It’s eating away
The depths of my soul
into disarray.
If I can’t have you, If I can’t hold you
I don’t know what I’m gonna do.
I might die, I might leave
But never, now, will I believe
That you will ever love me, hon,
Now I know I’m not the one.
*chorus*x2
Why are the fates so cruel?
Why must they make me their fool?
They chew me up and spit me out,
only to put me into another bout/
What do they have against me?
Why can’t they leave me be?
They toss me and turn me,
they hurt me and burn me,
They give me the world,
only to take it away.
Author notes
same girl as my last two, i know im pathetic, but oh well...
Written March 22nd, 2004
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Amazing
Amazing I really got into this poem i could relate so well to it just by the way you worded it! I love your vocab. and how you dont repeat, great flow. Its really amazing and keep writing! ~Leigh -
AWESOME!!!
i loved this. it's it's so kewl! i dunno how to express it but i just liked it. wow. keep it up
ttyl
luv
Bec -
Awesome!
Hey Justin.. i luv this poem! It'll be great when i sing it while u play! ly!
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This Rocks!!
Oh wow this has so much meaning in it and wow it's just amazing. The music is like flowing into my head i actually sang the words instead of reading it. Please keep writing like this it rocks!-Natasha -
i like the way you write, you write with a lot of emotion and flow, love the chorus!
-mell -
wow. that's awesome. put that into a song and it would be amazing. it flows really well and its perfect in showing how you feel and makes it really easy to relate to.great write, and keep it up, its awesome that you obviously have such a good source of inspiration.
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Wow this is great! I totally got a rhythm going in my head! the words flow so great together! Bravo!
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Hey that was really good, i loved it! Do u play guitar with it aswell? That would sound good. Bye
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WoW I love the feelings you put into this and the words you used it just flowed so good and I love it great job and keep it up. Adrian
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