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Crystal


Love it is so crystal clear
Passion rises when you’re near
I gaze into my crystal ball
To see the writing on the wall

Born at the dawning of Aquarius
Attracted to humor yet serious
I look into your crystalline eyes
Though transparent they hold surprise

Like pure water from heaven above
You drench your lover with translucent love
It’s like drowning in a clear stream
You have come to me in a dream

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  • Jaded Lily gold member
    July 9

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    Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest. Best of wishes now and always. Your poem is lovely and heart-felt.
    Lily &heart;


  • Ez Writer silver member
    July 5

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    Bravo !!

    A beautifully written , romantic & mesmerizing poem !
    Love the rhyme & flow !! Way to go my friend ...
    Best regards , Easy