Love it is so crystal clear
Passion rises when you’re near
I gaze into my crystal ball
To see the writing on the wall
Born at the dawning of Aquarius
Attracted to humor yet serious
I look into your crystalline eyes
Though transparent they hold surprise
Like pure water from heaven above
You drench your lover with translucent love
It’s like drowning in a clear stream
You have come to me in a dream
A contest entry
- In Love and Loving It! by Jaded Lily.
2000 points, ended July 9, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest. Best of wishes now and always. Your poem is lovely and heart-felt.
Lily &heart;


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Bravo !!
A beautifully written , romantic & mesmerizing poem !
Love the rhyme & flow !! Way to go my friend ...
Best regards , Easy



