she walks the line of fire
bent over the edge of hell
waiting to be taken.
my hands take her higher
feed her heat, ring her bell
as a lover I won’t be forsaken.
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just checking the temperature
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Sigh... brilliant.
Reminds me of a dream I had once... long ago.
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always good to have flames,
this one brought some.
well penned
passions
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Seems like you warm up pretty quickly... I like that!
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dont tease me, i like to warm up slow, lol, but sometimes, you just cant help it
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Tease??? see them horns I'm wearing? I give free rides for ladies...
and you're right you just can't help it... its a natural thing -
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ha,ha... I have to laugh, you haven't even gotten on and your smiling
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LOL! Just checking the temperature, huh?
It's rising! Love the rhyme scheme, the imagery, the whole shebang!
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Glad to warm you
Thanks
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