There's no-one around to find,
I've ran out of places to hide.
I'm stuck between whats real and whats not,
My heart is so untouched it seems to be rot.
I'm all alone,
I wish i could stop this flesh from peeling of my bones.
I'm sercertly dying,
My insides can not stop crying.
A contest entry
- Sometimes its not because of you by tarcus.
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Nice
Secretly is incorrectly spelled,but with the exception of this the write is very nice. -
good
short n sweet
nice one tis a good poem
well done

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I like this it was good keep on writing heart break I am no stranger too it sucks when it happens over and over again



