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Rot of my heart

There's no-one around to find,
I've ran out of places to hide.

I'm stuck between whats real and whats not,
My heart is so untouched it seems to be rot.

I'm all alone,
I wish i could stop this flesh from peeling of my bones.

I'm sercertly dying,
My insides can not stop crying.

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  • cazzy71
    July 14
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    Nice

    Secretly is incorrectly spelled,but with the exception of this the write is very nice.


  • Jayde1
    July 10
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    good

    short n sweet

    nice one tis a good poem

    well done

  • I like this it was good keep on writing heart break I am no stranger too it sucks when it happens over and over again