Hey little girl, Why are you so sad?
Its because lifes made me mad.
Hey little girl, Why do you bleed?
Its because I've seen so many bad dreams.
Hey little girl, Why are you crying?
Its because my lies noone longer buys.
Hey little girl, Why are you so cold?
Its because all of there lies they told.
Hey little girl, Why are you dying?
Its because of all these things in my mind I'm seeing.
Hey little girl, Why are you saying goodbye?
Its because I'm running out of time.
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by alex brooks
A contest entry
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WHEN I READ THE TITLE OF THIS I IMMEDIATELY
THOUGHT OF THAT SONG FROM ANNIE. BUT NOT QUITE
THIS POEM IS VERY SHORT AND COULD BE ADDED ONTO, BUT IS GOOD AS IS.
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Its because my lies noone longer buys.
Its because all of there lies they told.
their,
It's because my lies no one no longer buys -
i loved this write,
i felt as if was the little girl and someone was asking me this. people are always too late.
i like how you didn't sugarcoat anything.
-beautiful write. -
THIS IS NICE !
KEEP WRiTiNG ! & THANKS SO MUCH 4 THE COMMENT -
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your welcome
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