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crazy(cento)

Baby,
Please Don't Do this to me.
Don't Leave Me,
hiding behind
cheap champagne and chandeliers.
The crystal ball doesn't lie-
I'm not crazy.

A contest entry

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  • J. M. Spenser
    July 5

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    Wow. This was awesome. And thank you very much for doing that. This really is quite good. Well done! Supremely!!!

    Thank you so much for entering. All the best in the contest.