black velvet
white lace
black velvet
white lace
black velvet
happy face
black makeup
happier face
little bunches
seducing all
playing in playgrounds
elbows cut
knees grazed
pretty blood
red blood
menstrual blood
blood from broken virginities
nymphets bleeding
no longer attractive
to those who know how
shimmering graces
dancing elegantly
mixture of exotic cocktails
downed by strangers
in night time scarlet dresses
Author notes
its 1.32am so apologies for this lol
In a list
A contest entry
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564 points, ended July 6, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Mania!! :D by XxLoverOfDarknessxX.
900 points, ended July 8, 87 entries
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ooh I love this.
lolita is a subject that intrests us both
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i'm reading the book, but appaarently the movie is good too.
check it out ^_^
thankies muchly.
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Hmm...this was AMAZING!
I loved it! congrats on the gold; it was righfully deserved. This was just a well written piece. WOW! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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awwwh thankies ^_^
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OOH!
Congrats on gold. Well thought for a tired mind.
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thank you ^_^ my first!!
heh, yea i trust my tired mind more than my awake one...
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I loved the way everything strung together, this was really well done. Insomniatic writings and such often hold the best potency in them. Thank you for your entry!
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that is so true! its strange to think that when we're sleep deprived so much more comes out.
thanks for the lovely comment ^_^
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For something written while you were tired, this is actually a good write, Sinead.
I liked the flow, and your word choice added depth to it.
When a girl becomes a woman, men watch out...lol
Bravo
'D' (Scott)
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it is aint it? i've just read it, and thought "damn i'm good" lol!
hey its not just men. its everyone. pms, dude, pms...
many thanks ^_^
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