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Unconscious Illusions

Behind closed eyes
Mystery and darkness lie
Blurry images and drowning hopes
Fears and transcendent dreams
Beauty and wonder
Death and decay
Memories of tearful goodbyes
Dizzying and deep
Painful agony
Peaceful sweetness
And sweet serenity
Drifting through insanity
And confusion


Dreaming a song of salvation
Through the open mind

Author notes

My interpretation of what goes on inside one's mind.

~Memoirs of a Girl

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  • Xxpoison.kissesxX silver member
    September 4, 2009

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    wow... this was excellent. love the way you ended it with the open mind... and what goes on in ones head... lovely


  • DontObjectifyMe
    July 6, 2009

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    This is an awesome poem, very deep and real. Something that I think almost everyone will relate to. It is beautifully written and is a good way of explaining the paths of the mind.
    Well done
    xoxoxoxx