The clock ticks by
And we're still here
Grasping through the air
And never reaching each other
Standing still and crying out
Our attempts fail
We stumble blindly
In the brightest of daylight
Attempt after attempt
We lose again and again
Together.
How well is the emotion portrayed?
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Yo, wow I think the line "together" made this poem for me, it made it very powerful to me and I can strongly relate. I think its great but the together line really made it for me. I reread it a couple times because I think it means something to me. Thank you for joining my moresome.
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awww really sweet and i really liked it. this is an amazing poiece of work. really well written.
thanks for entering and good luck
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