Life is so hard...
it took you away from me when we were both young...
we had future in front of us
a special relationship based on love and trust
I just want one thing
to see you again,to touch you...
I need to tell you how much I miss you,love you
I can't live in a world without you
a world that feels pity for me...
Let me live in the memories...
Your letters...
those that you left behind after you...were dead
as you had promised...
were a destination to me;
so i can continue living for the next day,month
The happiness of others hurts me...
I know it is so selfish,and that is killing me
Where are you Jerry???
Your letters came to the end...
so what now???
I won't ever feel again that you are alive...
I will never fell you through your advises...
through your "P.S. I love you"
Oh, Jerry... I wish you were here
I promise you...
I will continue my life...
I will stand on my legs
I will have help from my friends
I'll do it for you...
as much as I can;
cause I know you want that...
P.S. I love you,I will always belong to you,even if you are not here with me...
Author notes
The Novel is "P.S. I love you" by Cecelia Ahern... It is just amazing, and full of emotions!!!
A contest entry
- Love A Challenge? by DistilledGin.
550 points, ended July 24, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oooooo wow!! LOVELY and SAD at same time!! But beautifully written!! I understand the feeling in this!! Í felt as if I was inside of this poetry!! He will always be beside u in some way shape or form!!Just amazíng Hun!! I really enjoyed reading this!! Thanks for sharing this piece!!
Keep ur head held high!!
*Kelsi*
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Powerful Piece!
This is a very beautiful and emotionally powerful piece! Thank you for entering into my contest! And Goodluck!!!
~Gin
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"Life is so hard...
it took you away from me when we were both young..."
life is unfair and sadly that is the nature of things
"Let me live in the memories..." many of us do that to escape the cruelty of reality
"I promise you...
I will continue my life...
I will stand on my legs
I will have help from my friends
I'll do it for you..."
that is a great mind set, to change and move on..that is a great
keep it u -
I love this movie! I've never read the book, but I plan to.
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