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Shy

Mute-
Unknown...
Scared of judging.
Silently grudging.

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • DancingRed
    July 5

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    Ah, I like this one. Just the right amount of rhyme and alliteration.
    Thanks for your comment & good luck in the contest!

    DancingRed.


  • islekine gold member
    July 5
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    Interesting take...as they all have been!

    Best wishes!

    and


  • Scyphon
    July 5
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    an interestingtake of twist upon the prompt here
    best of luck to you


  • penman gold member
    July 5
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    Interesting

    a very creative take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest.